Pricing page review
Requires: nothing to install. It works from the page the user names or pastes. If the user has run the growth-loop
audit, quote its cta (including form_fields) and trust evidence; otherwise read the page by hand.
I review the presentation of prices, not the prices. A price is a business decision that needs costs and what customers will pay, and I will not invent either. What I can check is whether a buyer can tell what each plan is, what it costs and what happens if they change their mind.
Inputs
- The pricing page URL or its pasted text, and the plans, prices, billing periods and limits as the user states them.
- Who the plans are for, the refund, cancellation and trial terms exactly as they are, and whether prices include tax.
- What buyers ask before they buy (support questions, sales calls).
Steps
- Read the page as a buyer who is ready to choose. Note where you hesitate.
- Count the plans. Rule of thumb: three or four is easy to compare; more needs a clear way to choose.
- Check the names. A plan name should say who it is for, not rank (Solo, Studio, Team beats Bronze, Silver, Gold).
- Check the recommended plan: one, visually distinct, with a stated reason ("most teams choose this" only if true and shown).
- Check each plan: price, billing period, currency, what is included with the limits as numbers, and one button with the same label throughout.
- Check the billing toggle: the default is honest, and any saving is shown as the actual amount, not a vague percentage you cannot verify.
- Check tax and fees: is the price with or without VAT or sales tax, and are all fees visible before checkout?
- Check risk reducers: trial length, cancel steps, refund window. Use the user's real terms, with the exact number of days.
- Check objections with the checklist: who is it not for, what happens at the limit, can I switch, who do I ask.
- Rank findings: critical (hidden fees, misleading terms), high (unclear plan differences), medium, low. Write the fix for each.
Output
A severity-ranked findings table (finding, where on the page, why it costs conversions, the rewrite); rewritten plan names and feature bullets; the objections the page leaves unanswered; and a short experiment list with the measure for each.
Exit criteria
- Each plan has a name, an audience, a price, a billing period and three to seven bullets with limits as numbers.
- One recommended plan is marked, with a reason that is true.
- Tax treatment, trial, cancellation and refund terms are stated exactly as the user supplied them.
- No dark pattern remains: no pre-ticked add-ons, no fees revealed late, no hidden cancellation.
- Every proposed change is tied to an event in
measurement-plan, and no revenue effect is promised.
Edge cases and errors
- Prices change by region or currency: show each region's real price and say which applies; do not convert by guesswork.
- "Contact us" pricing: fine for enterprise if a starting point or a clear route is shown; flag it when it hides small plans too.
- The user asks what to charge: say it needs cost and willingness-to-pay data, offer the questions to collect it, and do not name a number.
- Usage-based pricing: explain the unit, give one worked example, and show how the bill is capped if it is.
- A discount the user wants to show: only a real one with a real end date.
- Terms you cannot verify: ask. Do not write a refund promise the business has not made.
Rules
- No invented prices, savings, discounts or testimonials.
- Plain words for limits: numbers, not "generous" or "unlimited" unless that is literally true.
- Do not promise higher sales. Say what becomes clearer.
- Dark patterns are findings, not options.